Lovely, the way it sounds quite creepy and meancing. Superb, keep goin!

Wicked! I like dark poetry like this. It's just the kind of person I am. And if people couldn't figure out what(or who rather) the Whisper was, then maybe they should have paid more attention to the poem. Maybe now I'll have to look for that book. Anyways, great poem and keep up the good work!

Thats a really good poem very eerie Muhahahaha! err...anyway you're a great poet!