Reviews for Dream Escape
Weeba chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
I don't know...there's something funky about the rhythm of this, and you rhyme in some places and don't rhyme in others...it seems a little jumbled. The language is good, but the thoughts aren't expressed very clearly or in a very organized manner. Of course, that might've been what you were going for, but it doesn't seem that way. Right now it just seems like you wrote it randomly and put it up.

Actually, I just did the exact same thing, so I'm one to talk, but still...

I hope I haven't completely flamed you. I'm just saying what I think is true. Keep trying, and I'm off to see some of your other work!
ruth anne boothe chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
One word. WOW.
Kryss Lain chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
I like this. Very nicely written...(i think i over...Nope..) This is really good.
DestructionMage chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
This is great! I really enjoyed reading it ... so much detailed words, it seems to flow so well, so... heartfelt I guess. Unlike any of my own -_-
Llama Face chapter 1 . 10/20/2001
whoa. Great poem. It had a nice rhythm. Keep writing! Llama Face