Reviews for Kite
beti213 chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
cute and snappy... I especially like the last line and "a paper eagle in the sky" well written and not overdone :)
MidnightBlaze chapter 1 . 12/11/2001
this gives me a sense of loneliness. i like it, but i'm not sure why it makes me feel so alone. i may be way off base on that one, but hey, i can only look at it through my point of view. very good, however. and also? short can be a lot better than some of the epics i write... hehe