Reviews for Vega
PM20 chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
Beautiful work as usual. Is there a reason you chose to write this poem with commas instad of making them each a different line? I love the imagery in this poem, I pictured everything happending on a dark evening sky, wonderful work.
joie 610 chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
nice questions! one thing is... in the beginning, the story is told in a third person way... and then it becomes a first person... why? it goes back and forth to vega... and if you want answers to some of the questions... (seriously) i can answer some for you.
Candie K chapter 1 . 7/25/2000
Wow! Just wow!
Selena Benilo chapter 1 . 7/18/2000
When are you going to call me back?I like the story yes,but this is driving me insane!
Princess Leiawinsky chapter 1 . 7/14/2000
Now...THAT was really beautiful! Well-written! :))