Reviews for You Blew It
Realdmg chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
i feel bad for you
nice poem though
Panda-Bear-42 chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
My parents aren't divorced(i have no idea why not.) but even though he still lives with me i don't think i have talked to him in over 6 months...good poem it made me job.
Thepolia chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
this is good. (i can feel what you mean... my dad never even bother to 'call us up')
Blue Cherry chapter 1 . 3/14/2003
My (foster) parents aren't divorced ( unfortunately) and I don't know anyone who is divorces so I can't somewhat relate to your poem but I still loved it alot!

It's very well written

Keep up the great job!

Blue Cherry
Kellza chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
I know what it's like to have a father who doesn't understand what it means to be a dad. Once again, it's almost like you tried too hard to make it "fit" a certain way (rhyming the last lines in the first two stanzas) but otherwise, I like the short sentences. it conveys the frustrated anger that comes when someone you need to be responsible just doesn't get it.
werepanther chapter 1 . 1/9/2002
I loved the rhyming beat. It's real good, the poem not the subject. Kinda said. But you wrote the poem wonderfully!
Belle Of The Cell I'm Gone chapter 1 . 12/21/2001
This did NOT suck! Its a good poem, tells a story and makes you want to decipher exactly what the reasons behind your words are. I've read your GTA fic and its clear you have talent. LB xxx
ILOVELINKINPARK222 chapter 1 . 12/20/2001
did your dad diue on 9/11? Not being rude but you made it seem that way.
Llama Face chapter 1 . 11/11/2001
good poem! thanks for pointing it out to me:). I like poetry that tells a story and that a person writes about themself. anyway keep writing and i'll go read your other poem. ~Llama Face~ Don't diss the Llama
Dream Angel chapter 1 . 11/10/2001
Now this is a sad poem, but it's a good poem. I like your writing style.
Exceptance is the key chapter 1 . 11/5/2001

I don't think your poem sucked. I think it was really good! And your right with what you said!