|Reviews for Contemplating Faults|
| katie chapter 1 . 11/6/2001
it all boils down to fate yes, and it drags you to the very core of evil. i have finally set foot in that part of existence and it's hard to climb out of the pit. amen to what you say.
| CE Fleming forgot to sign in chapter 1 . 11/5/2001
interesting view on man. It is true however. Man, or most of it, seems to look at themselves as betters than anything else. We devuldge in our own selfishness and prosperity, at least on earth anyway, but we really arent getting anywhere. Well, the final bell rang, and i have to cut this short, or else I be late to, none other than, creative writing! WEll, good job, I hope to read more of your work.
| silversilence chapter 1 . 11/5/2001
wow, this is full of good poetic imagery...not an original topic for most people, but one wrote in an original way :) very good.