|Reviews for Firmament or Is, Ea, Id|
| Lalage chapter 1 . 11/2/2003
I'm not sure I understand the symbolism in here. If it is meant to be symbolic, that is. I love the title. I'm a Latin reader and the name of the story just stung my eyes among your other works until I read it.
You have a gift of weaving an atmosphere which engulfs the reader, gives a dreamy quality to existence for one fleeting moment. But that is enough.
My trite and true ending: Good work! Cheers, Lalage.
| Raindare chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Wow, this reminds me of one of those Dr. Seuss stories. A nice fable.
| Electra Fairford chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Hee! I really like this. Bizarre... seems very Victorian for some reason, probably just the dialogue. Lovely. The last line is absolutely perfect - the whole thing is great.
| Adio chapter 1 . 11/12/2001
Oh this is so bizarre...I want to sit here and try to figure it out! I really don't get it...quite...I think...ugh! I can't get it! PLEASE, tell me what it means?