Reviews for Trust
somefreakylooknchick chapter 22 . 2/24/2005
o my gosh. this was the coolest story. I think you should seriously consider publishing this. I would buy the damn book! Let me know if you do. I don't really like reading stories on fictionpress because their long and I'm lazy, but I am so.. glad I read this one! ah! this was great!
somefreakylooknchick chapter 6 . 2/22/2005
man.. I have to stop reading it now.. it's getting late. I be on the chapter the first thing when I get home! yay! this is really interesting.
somefreakylooknchick chapter 1 . 2/22/2005
wow! this is awesome!
FeelingMorbid chapter 22 . 1/22/2005
Wow...I'm glad I sticked around for the end! Ok, a few things...I think you should revise the first couple chapters, considering that they (no offence) need to be um revised. But I love it anyways! The drama, the romance, the I mean it! Keep up the AWESOME work!

Insanity Da Best Policy chapter 22 . 3/13/2004
That was like one of the best! I'm still crying though. Poor Jake. I didn't want to end it like Jake getting hurt. But still ... we can't deny some facts. *grimaces* What's gonna happen to him? Poor him.
Nice writing. I knew it had something to do with her father ... but I suspected Dianna cause she was too good *bangs head* Lol. Anyways excellent!
kat-mle chapter 22 . 3/4/2004
good! Read the whole thing beginnig to end! Very creative! But I think Jake should have got her!
Mysti San chapter 22 . 1/28/2004
Right. This is Mysti San, the one who made that wicked long review on your other story 'The Prize.' So I'm too lazy to log in! Shush. Good story - y'know, I had a very sneaking suspicion that it had been Kait's father ever since she found the ring. I don't know, I'm just weird like that...but it made sense to my mind oo
Great characters plot suspense, again! Although...I might be naive, but the climactic chapter, chapter 20, was a little, eh...unbelievable. I mean, I just couldn't believe it when Kelly died. Maybe I'm going to a much more innocent high school where people are never murdered and am just not used to the idea of killing someone in the school's basement oo' I dunno...of course I wouldn't want you to change it, since it's such a vital point in the story, but it did seem a bit...unreal. But that's just me.
Romances were sweet and painful. I swear, when Cameron kissed Kait in the dance, I was half-expecting Jake to turn up and have a whole Kelly-episode all over again. But that's me rambling again...
All-in-all, a very good, well-written story. I liked it muchly _
Bellawen chapter 22 . 12/29/2003
All I can say is ... excellent
Pam chapter 22 . 12/18/2003
This was a good story. Althought I would have like to see Kait with jake. Hate poor Kelly took a bullet LOL.
Silver Eyes Bright chapter 22 . 12/14/2003
I loved this! I love stories that end with kiss! Finally i found out about the evil duo, though one of the partners was much eviler. Wait, is that a word? I don't know! Whatever! I loved this and look forward to your future works! And the continuing of the other ones! GOOD LUCK IN YOUR WRITING!
Silver Eyes Bright chapter 13 . 12/14/2003
Cute! This is adorable! I can't wait to see what's goin' to happen next. So what's goin' on with your story The Executioners on your website? I would totally like more of that too! Please! I'll be back soon to read more of this!
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 22 . 10/7/2003
I am Gone chapter 22 . 9/16/2003
I recall reading this story a while ago and never reviwing it.I just wanted to say what a great way to end 't see it commng.
Priscilla chapter 22 . 9/5/2003
Great story. It was suspenseful and funny.
AerisGhost chapter 22 . 6/20/2003
Aw. I love sappy romance stories. Although it should have been Jake she kissed at the end, not Cameron. Oh well, it was simply amazing. I love this story, and I'm gonna put it on my favorite stories list!
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