so let me get this straight, they should read my work

cause I have a labret piercing? well whatever works

I guess. anyway's onto the poem, I like it, has a nice little

flow to it. Good use of words. and ummm yeah, I can't

think of anything else to say.

I like breathing!

Unbelievable...this is amazing. I really enjoyed your poetry. your story about shanti, gatti, etc. is awesome too, but I think this poem deserves more recognition than just .net...I like blueberries. Thats all I have to say. *alex*

Hmmm, sounds rather Creed inspired, but perhaps I'm imagining things. Me likes, but, sorry, I don't understand it either. But, I see you are naked, that's nice, isn't it? And exposed? Beautiful. You could get payed for that, you know.

This thing all things devours:

Birds, beasts, trees, flowers;

Gnaws iron, bites steel;

Grinds hard stones to meal;

Slays king, ruins town,

And beats high mountain down.

Yet steals the time we share in bliss, to stay awhile, and own a kiss. Voiceless to breathe and keep the heart, this temporal rift tears us apart.

-Q'Amundae