woah- its just amazing- i love the ballad style...

Wow. Powerful. Awsume. Amazing. Cant write in whole sentences. Wow. lol. Wow.

.::pltzchen::.

I find this absolutely marvelous, and also quite thought-provoking. The only thing that irked me was a small typo in the second stanza:

"It’s job was perfect for tonight", which should have been "Its job was perfect for tonight".

Other than that, this is great. -shivers again-

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Very good poetry, I don't want to criticize your poetry because my poetry isn't good at all but it sounds better if you either don't use rhyming at all or only use rhyming instead of switching between the two. Thats just me though everyone else might not care, good work though!

Tragic and a bit creepy.

... That was gruesome and deep. I loved it!

Truth.

You are demented, heh heh. I knew it was a knife from the first line. What made you write this?

I don't usually read poetry but his one really stood out.

Sad. I someone suffering from a little depression lately? JK.