|Reviews for Tears|
| Katie Champagne chapter 1 . 1/7/2002
ooh, that was very good! I love the imagery.. great job! *sigh*
| ginny graham chapter 1 . 12/3/2001
all i can say is: you must have a wonderful creative writing teacher!
good strong verbs drive this metaphor forward...and I like the repetion of the first line.
| quackingduk chapter 1 . 11/21/2001
that is VERY good. It's original and unique. it stands out and you keep the rythm steady (a technique I haven't quite mastered). I love the wording and you keep it steady in the commmon but very effective two line verses format. i LOVE it. keep it up
| Kit THe Kat chapter 1 . 11/20/2001
that was wonderful!o and another thing your great with words and make them rhyme very good.
| Melsa chapter 1 . 11/20/2001
This poem is so beautifully written! I love the imagery you create. But one thing I'd like to comment on is something in the first and last lines (since they're the same). I think you should try to use a stronger, more descriptive verb than 'are'. The rest of the poem is so eloquent and flowing, but I feel that 'are' is so simple that it almost takes away from the rich diction in the rest of the poem. Just something to think about...
| Sidhe chapter 1 . 11/20/2001
luv it luv it luv it. beautiful. - Sidhe
| empty account chapter 1 . 11/20/2001
I like it. Short and sweet. tears are like tiny falling stars.