ooh, that was very good! I love the imagery.. great job! *sigh*

all i can say is: you must have a wonderful creative writing teacher!

good strong verbs drive this metaphor forward...and I like the repetion of the first line.

that is VERY good. It's original and unique. it stands out and you keep the rythm steady (a technique I haven't quite mastered). I love the wording and you keep it steady in the commmon but very effective two line verses format. i LOVE it. keep it up

that was wonderful!o and another thing your great with words and make them rhyme very good.

This poem is so beautifully written! I love the imagery you create. But one thing I'd like to comment on is something in the first and last lines (since they're the same). I think you should try to use a stronger, more descriptive verb than 'are'. The rest of the poem is so eloquent and flowing, but I feel that 'are' is so simple that it almost takes away from the rich diction in the rest of the poem. Just something to think about...

luv it luv it luv it. beautiful. - Sidhe

I like it. Short and sweet. tears are like tiny falling stars.