Reviews for P: Blood and Smiles
vixxy chapter 1 . 2/11/2002
I think that this can be compared to one of Edgar Allen Poe's but I can't remember what it was called. The rhythm just reminds me of it. This is good.
jainanicole chapter 1 . 2/10/2002
Wow. That's *wonderful*. Wow. :D GREAT job. ~Jaina~
Graham Dawson1 chapter 1 . 1/13/2002
Like I said in my letter, I'm not much of a poetry reader, but I like this. I don't know if I'm simply reading too much in to it, but I can see an incredible backstory to this poem... quite inspiring, in a way.
audig chapter 1 . 12/6/2001
I like how that part repeats, this if only place sounds fun, do you know a way to get there by any chance?
Kiimuu chapter 1 . 11/29/2001
And you say my poetry flows well.. ha. This poem caught my interest so well I just had to read it twice. :P Very inspiring!
Koneko chapter 1 . 11/24/2001
I really like the style in this poem you've so wonderfully written. I Esp. like how you've repeated some of the lines a few times. I think it really brings out the poem. This poem is awsome! Keep writing
Nerilka-chan chapter 1 . 11/24/2001
if only... great poetry. keep up the good work