|Reviews for Rule #1: Don't Rescue Virgin Sacrifices!|
| Sally-andersonn chapter 2 . 11/15/2005
The characters need a little work. And the things that happen to them need some thinking out. Though you do it with enough style for it to be bearable.
| Sally-andersonn chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
I loved the list at the beginning. It was a little slow at the beginni gbut the pace picke dup at the end. Kayla seems to be a little Mary Sue thoguh.
| V. Caslon chapter 4 . 1/24/2005
That was awesome! Hilarious and well-written, and the ending had just the right tone.
| DragonRaye chapter 4 . 7/27/2004
i thought if i went away for a while there would be at least ONE new chapter. you just crushed my dreams. *pout* better get one up soon. *raises wooden spoon* else you shall be beaten!
| serif chapter 4 . 7/19/2004
i love this story. its absolutly brilliant and so funny. please update soon
| Bathmat chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Excellent intro. I especially like point number 2.
| Lorelei chapter 4 . 11/8/2003
Excellent story! I laughed much. _ Please continue soon!
| Kouryou Sanomi chapter 4 . 10/2/2003
AH! How interesting! :D Update soon! *grin* I want to see what happens!
| lucid-psyche chapter 2 . 9/8/2003
Whe! Good story, quite funny. We need more humor these days ... "I prefer the term self-preservationist." That's gotta be one of my favorite lines. _ Anyways, not much more I can say except that it's one of my favorites here.
| Cassandra Anthemyst chapter 4 . 4/14/2003
This story is SO great, I'm so glad you're continuing it. I love the rules at the beginning of each chapter, chapter two's were the best, though. I can't help wondering if you're going to make this a Kayla/Ren fic, but somehow I don't think so. Which in itself would be interesting. So rarely do you see a story in which a guy and a girl start out hating eachother, become friends, and then DON'T end up as a couple. I can see that working for this. But you're the author, I'm sure whatever you do will be great. Keep posting!
| C.C. Lea chapter 4 . 4/8/2003
Now how in the world did the horse get up there? Very nice, snappy reparte and I enjoy her little lapses into Ren-jealousy immensely.
| All Mighty Terrestrial chapter 4 . 4/7/2003
Oh! So what's going to happen now? And inheriting the fireball power. Methinks they had better get him training, and soon.
| All Mighty Terrestrial chapter 3 . 2/20/2003
AN UPDATE! (big gleeful smile) I'm so pleased. I was worried that you had abandoned this story for good, and I was so disappointed, because I really do enjoy this so much more than most of the books I've ever bought. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE keep going with this!
| C.C. Lea chapter 3 . 2/20/2003
How extremely charming! And, watch out world, you've got some talent. Very evocative, amusing story. I've enjoyed it. so far?
| Tamashii no Kurayami chapter 3 . 2/19/2003
I really like this style you wrote with it was really good, and kinda funny. Keep on going!