Reviews for Perfection
RNL chapter 1 . 3/31/2003
Wow. This is simply amazing. Talent. You have style and a real grasp on whats going on around us.

Applemocha chapter 1 . 2/21/2002
All of your writing is so true and exactly what I went through last year and over the summer. (And to some, small extent what I go through occasionally now.) Congradualtions on being able to figure it all out.
LadySaturn1 chapter 1 . 11/27/2001
Too true, too true. But I'm starting learn this, I just wish I could get it through my head sometimes. Excellent poem.
Alix chapter 1 . 11/27/2001
Excellent - a really clever ending.
Nerilka-chan chapter 1 . 11/26/2001
too true. good job. i really enjoy reading your poetry. ~neri-chan
unwritten chapter 1 . 11/26/2001
great! i completely agree