Reviews for For You
MistrissD chapter 1 . 3/25/2004
Know this feeling all too well, I love the repitition and the shortness of all the lines, it makes it all the more powerful
Shebster chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
Good job, but you might consider capitalizing your i's.
End Of Trend chapter 1 . 2/21/2003
I'd have to agree. I was worried there for a minute. Were you listening to that song at the time? I know one of my poems has the lyrics to a song in it but that was intended. Good though, almost brings me back a few months.
SiC CHiCK chapter 1 . 3/5/2002
I wonder how many poems i read!

Like em' ALL

stay [sic]

SiC CHiCK
Alix chapter 1 . 11/28/2001
Not bad, but you have so pinched some of those words... (sounds worryingly like the Garbage song '#1 Crush' from the Romeo and Juliet soundtrack)