|Reviews for Bittersweet|
| Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This was amazing the description was amazing- I'm gonna go share this poem now. Good job. :)
| A. J. Krautwurst chapter 1 . 10/4/2006
this is nice as vampire literature goes. (i wouldn't call myself the biggest fan). the last 4 lines pull everything together really well. i like the repetition of the word sin. one thing that stuck out to me is this:
at first it feels painful-like it feels wonderful-like pleasure.
bullets are tangible, while pleasure is not. if you chose something physical to represent pleasure, the way you chose bullets to represent pain, i think it would make a stonger image. just a suggestion though.
i also like the line 'you can feel your life dying.' i just realized how awesome it is. that's all i have to say!
| Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
Interesting. I like the imagery and the overall feel of the piece. Since you seem to be a connosieur of vampire stories, I would like your review of one of mine. Nice job with this.
| SiC CHiCK chapter 1 . 3/5/2002
Vampires...A true Insperation...
| scully chapter 1 . 12/5/2001
Yeah, vampires are sexy. amen