Reviews for Experience
SplintofGrass chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
are you sure you've had this experience before? i liked how you said 'my' after so many 'your's.
anathalea chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
hot ... haha, you have a good style - single words, very impacting
CarrieTheVampire chapter 1 . 7/20/2003
that was really odd but i liked it alot!
End Of Trend chapter 1 . 2/21/2003
I really liked it. So primal. It's a bit like something I wrote. We have a few things in common.
Erika Lynn chapter 1 . 11/28/2001
i like the structure of this poem...especially the rythem of "your blood/

your skin/ your smell/ your sex/ my sin"