Reviews for Unfinished Business
Keliara chapter 25 . 10/6/2003
Wow. This is aa AMAZING chapter. Thanks for the quick update!
hearthands chapter 25 . 10/6/2003
Poor ! Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
CynicInLove chapter 25 . 10/6/2003
secrets, secrets, secrets...this was a mysterious chapter..a lot of foreshoadowing going on and suspense..upadte sooN!
SAngel chapter 25 . 10/6/2003
:-)
Keliara chapter 24 . 10/5/2003
THAT"S IT! I WAIT PATIENTLY FOR WHAT SEEMS LIKE YEARS AND THAT"S ALL YOU GIVE ME? It was good...but PLEASE, PLEASE update soon! You're killing me!
SAngel chapter 24 . 10/5/2003
Robyn is awesome
ve chapter 24 . 10/5/2003
robyn is so nice. more please!
hearthands chapter 24 . 10/4/2003
This is really good! Update soon!
pressandclick chapter 24 . 10/3/2003
Great chapter. Loved the way Robyn handled Cassandra! Update soon please!
CynicInLove chapter 24 . 10/3/2003
glad to hear of the fast updaets...so we'l;l be seeing the next chapter up soon?
Irish Elf chapter 24 . 10/3/2003
That was interesting. hm... i wonder what his 'wife' is gonna do to get back in his life.
Oh-are-ay-en-gee-ee chapter 23 . 9/19/2003
Always been a fan of your work, and while it was a bit of pity that I've been busy and unable to read the chapters and review them as you uploaded them, it was kind of a good thing too. Had the most awesome long reading session. :) Love the whole Jean Grey - Professer X thing, and they really are similar! It's great the way you're slowly building up the relationship between the two (even if it does start to build up on the reader "Just kiss her will you?") because it makes it seem realistic in a situation that I can't relate to. I can honestly say that I am not a male single parent being hounded by an ex-wife and nor will I ever be. XP XP
crissy chapter 23 . 9/19/2003
oh no!
CynicInLove chapter 23 . 9/13/2003
death? whoa...update soon!
Pretty Senshi chapter 23 . 9/10/2003
:) Chapter 23... *Cries* It's getting so good...next chapter soon? Hopefully something will happan between Robyn and Sam soon:)
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