I like how it can be applied to almost any time or situation. it's timeless. Good job!

Hey this is pretty good. its freaky because im reading this exactly one year after u wrote it. anyway, its great!

The poem thingy [ or whatever this is] is emotional. I like t. ::good job PA::

wow... intense! it's very very... deep! :) especially the one with the 'wishing eyes' and the last parts... ... it says some things people would've want to say but can't.. :) !

Woah... PA! This was... breathtaking! How did you come up with that? I will print this. I must read it again, under better light... this is beautiful.

It's very meaningful and full of emotion... like a dream that blows gently in the wind...