Reviews for It's Not That Easy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is great, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes i loved it i was about to get mad at you for killing lex and her baby off but she is alive and so is little adddie. I had a feeling micheal wasnt really a bad guy. Great story. :) |
![]() ![]() cool story read this s/2852452/1/Good_Different_or_Bad_Different |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is the Chapter supposed to be like this? Cause I can't read it properly and i think it's too short to be a chapter. I just started reading this today and I hope if this is a glitch or whatsoever, it would be fixed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems rushed. You didnt really let the story build. Oh, and the character descriptions were.. lacking. I didnt even know the color of the characters eyes. Great story. Some typos and again, plot holes. But good story you wrote something and got it out there is great enough. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I liked it! :) The beginning was a little rough, especially the transition from chapter 7 to 8, but the majority of it was great! I could definitely see how much your writing improved throughout this story and I can only say congratulations! Great job! -V. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story Hun! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! :D :D :D so cute~ i loved this ending, i love happy endings. :D :D :D hehe. |
![]() ![]() wats with all the damn simbols! its annoying. maybe you should get someone to beta your work because its very confusing to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() does he usually work for Chemmons? lol :) sounds good ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW that was adorable. LOL. Good job on the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I love how this story started. Nice job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw cuties! You don't know how glad I am that this ending was happy :) I got scared for a minute there when he was at Lex's funeral thinking that she died! But it was a nice surprise to know that she didn't :) Everything seemed really simple though, too simple, to be honest, especially in their scheme to kill her grandfather. I didn't really quite understand what was going on there, with the whole money and everything. I mean, I get that she gave all the money to charity, but what exactly was the grandfather trying to do? Why was he continuously watching them and scaring her? I think you should have also added in a scene where they discussed their future together or confessed that they loved each other, or something like that. I mean, there wasn't really much of a transition between Lex thinking that he would tell her to leave, and her assuming that he still wanted her around. Anyways though, they're really cute together :) The ending was cute especially. Haha, did you know sex on an airplane is illegal? But I mean... they had like... dry sex... lol. Anyways, good job. Nice story :) Keep writing! - Alyssa |
![]() ![]() AW! i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Screams* I loved it! The ending was wonderful! I'm glad that you didn't give up on this story! |