Okay...I am well and truly (and officially) impressed. In fact, reading certain parts of this inspired ME. Yet only for sketches of writing...not for a whole story. I'll have to think on those 'sketches' a bit longer :) Of course, music inspires me too...which is where some of the inspiration came from while also reading this story *g* In short...wonderful writing Lannie. Amazing. I'm in awe.

I've been reading quite a bit at lately Kelly, and I must say that your stories are definitely amongst the best of all of them. THey're truly amazing! You're SO talented. I never feel bored reading your stuff. I often feel bored reading others' stuff *lol* This was awesome. But anyway, onward and upward!

Er...er...reading on *scrabbles to find next chapter*

Wow. Just...wow. This is such an amazing piece, it's a shame that more people have not found it. I really want to see what happens next, though I get the feeling that there is no happy ending, not for this story. The characters are heart-wrenching, and you manage to make the reader sympathize so greatly with them in just a few short paragraphs. Great job! :)

~Sango

i cant believe that you have only 2 reviews on this story! it;s SO good man :D

good work big sissie

This is amazing. Is this original work? Or part of an existing story? Either way, I really want to know more...I have to know what happens. The speaker's heartbreak is palpable and very sad...and you really feel for Dancer as well. You have a gift for words and for painting vivid pictures in the reader's mind...

That rocked, girl, though I don't know what it's based on (lameoid me *g*). You paint the emotions and the scariness of the situation so well. Anyway, I am gonna read the rest of your stuff gradually.