Reviews for Dependence
Rocky Road chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
i think in the begining when you say "it will make an ocean i can't cross" it would probably be better if you put " can not" but other than that it is very good
Willy-Chan chapter 1 . 9/13/2002
I've never been one for this type of poem but it's still quite good. I like the first two verses best.
Cyanotok chapter 1 . 2/4/2002
Dove, once again: Wow! You have a gift for the written word many of us can only dreams. And put up Chapter 6 to Angels Without Wings already! :-) That story rocks. Anyways, keep writing. See ya!
umeboshi chapter 1 . 1/9/2002
this is so pretty it could be song lyrics - i really hope your friend does read it because it's beautiful and i know she'd be touched! i don't know what kind of music you listen to, but this reminds me some of Dido's music.
SakeBandit chapter 1 . 12/27/2001
Love is a fickle thing, and comes in many forms. May your battles be quiet and painless