Reviews for Amber Liquid
InfiniteDreamer04 chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
hmm..this was..interesting. i like the use of the subtle metaphor. keep writing.

forever dreaming,

~the infinite dreamer~
Inherent chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
Really good... Wow.
InkBlood chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
midzen chapter 1 . 2/28/2003
Ahh yes, the wonders of hate. I'd say you captured the feeling quite correctly.
Bitterscarlet chapter 1 . 12/9/2001
Full of malice. Excellent. My only complaint is the use of the word 'face' twice. In a poem so short it's too repetative. Maybe you could have put something like 'Keeps me from seeing / the look in your eye'...or something similar?