hmm..this was..interesting. i like the use of the subtle metaphor. keep writing.

forever dreaming,

~the infinite dreamer~

Really good... Wow.

wow..

Ahh yes, the wonders of hate. I'd say you captured the feeling quite correctly.

Full of malice. Excellent. My only complaint is the use of the word 'face' twice. In a poem so short it's too repetative. Maybe you could have put something like 'Keeps me from seeing / the look in your eye'...or something similar?