I liked the repetition of themes, and how the poem did portray its description. However the structure of the poem made it hard to feel a rhythm within, and therefore made it seem very random. It felt as if the stanzas were made without thought for what the rest of the poem would feel like. But overall a very nice piece and I loved the idea of the false utopia.

eh? written well, but i didn't understand it very well (but then again I'm a bit dim witted)