Your really have talent...I read one of your pieces, and thought it was good, but this is amazing! It really captures the mood and feeling, and the words set up for visual representation. Wow. )

Love your work, write more poetry!

-pH

These poems are (excuse my lang) F*ckin' awesome...u are truely talented...very very very talented..I loved these..I can't describe how I felt reading them..truely amazing..Ur work is remarkable!

~Sandra~

In my opinion, I like the Rose poem better than the others. Your opening was very thoughtful also. I didn't try to make sense of the poems; just look into them a little deeper and see what you were talking about, moving onto the next line, seeing the rose wilting, petals falling, color blooming... pretty pretty . Write a lot.

-until strawberry sherbert

You are quite talented. Keep up the good work!

i really liked that. it had a very romantic feel which contradicts the topic of the poem. its very despairing and makes u want 2 wail (or howl). i love it!