Reviews for Visions
dreamcatcher33 chapter 4 . 2/24/2006
Your really have talent...I read one of your pieces, and thought it was good, but this is amazing! It really captures the mood and feeling, and the words set up for visual representation. Wow. )
Teratoma chapter 4 . 6/16/2003
Love your work, write more poetry!

OptimisticRomantic chapter 4 . 5/12/2003
These poems are (excuse my lang) F*ckin' awesome...u are truely talented...very very very talented..I loved these..I can't describe how I felt reading them..truely amazing..Ur work is remarkable!

until strawberry sherbert chapter 3 . 2/23/2002
In my opinion, I like the Rose poem better than the others. Your opening was very thoughtful also. I didn't try to make sense of the poems; just look into them a little deeper and see what you were talking about, moving onto the next line, seeing the rose wilting, petals falling, color blooming... pretty pretty . Write a lot.

-until strawberry sherbert
Solthar Rygelsun chapter 3 . 1/18/2002
You are quite talented. Keep up the good work!
Goth Gal chapter 2 . 12/26/2001
i really liked that. it had a very romantic feel which contradicts the topic of the poem. its very despairing and makes u want 2 wail (or howl). i love it!