Reviews for You don't know me
Skitz too lazy to login chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
wow, i can totally relate to this one too, it's great, keep writing
SilverTear3 chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
serisoulsy...you are so incredible...it's like esactly what i am feeling towards my parents...or what i was until they found out...
mykokeshi chapter 1 . 12/17/2001
I think you are either just like me, or my equal opposite. I feel the same way. No one, hardly even I, knows my true self. I feel like a souless puppet.
AC1 chapter 1 . 12/17/2001
ouch! well, you certainly get your point across. sux to be your parents. i like your word usage, its very visceral, right up until the last line; it kinda leaves me hanging. wonder if you've ever imagined that your parents may be doing the same thing to you: showing only what they want to show or think they should show. could be an interesting counterpoem to your poem - maybe give it a shot and see what you come up with. keep writing - i like it!
Death's Girlfriend chapter 1 . 12/17/2001
Excellent! It reminds me of me
Adella chapter 1 . 12/17/2001
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I identify more than i'd like to admit. Keep writing, you have a gift.