Reviews for Broken Promise
voices untold chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
thats how I felt when my friends revealed what I do, I felt completely betrayed but more angry that people knew than that they told. Life just spirals out of hand sometimes.. Anyway great poem, it flows perfectly in a way that you get the true feeling.
CJ chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
It would have been better if you would have gone and shed a little light on the gist of the secret. But it's your business and if you want to keep it hid, then that's fine. Rate and review my poem promise.
Carey Smiyers
SilverTear3 chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
wow, once again you described what i felt when i was waiting to know what my parents would say/do/think, cuz i knew they would inf out, and you really desribed the agony of...waiting...
Kelly chapter 1 . 12/30/2001
Hey! I know I had a friend that had a problem and I had to tell someone in authority. But you want to know a secret. I doesn't just kill you having to wait but it also kills those who love that know and that they have to wait also.