Reviews for Broken Promise
voices untold chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
thats how I felt when my friends revealed what I do, I felt completely betrayed but more angry that people knew than that they told. Life just spirals out of hand sometimes.. Anyway great poem, it flows perfectly in a way that you get the true feeling.
CJ chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
It would have been better if you would have gone and shed a little light on the gist of the secret. But it's your business and if you want to keep it hid, then that's fine. Rate and review my poem promise.
~Carey Smiyers~
SilverTear3 chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
wow, once again you described what i felt when i was waiting to know what my parents would say/do/think, cuz i knew they would inf out, and you really desribed the agony of...waiting...
Kelly chapter 1 . 12/30/2001
Hey! I know I had a friend that had a problem and I had to tell someone in authority. But you want to know a secret. I doesn't just kill you having to wait but it also kills those who love that know and that they have to wait also.