That was...intresting. I can't think of an appropiate word or phrase. I think you could make it better if you rewrote it, but it easily be fine the way it is.

Powerful. There were a few places where the letters ran together, but that was probably a result of the upload process.

This had some good moments, alot fo them. But there are so many little things that take you right out of the beauttie of the words. Look threw it and you will find what im talking about

cool!

I liked it, but I think it could evolve better in a short story.

Whoah, too awesome.

I loved it! You're really good at writing!

Woof woof!Trying to review the same story again?Access denied!lol I had to..Im starting to get bugged by it...

I love this so much!Its so inspiring!I have some fics up,too!