I am indeed looking forward to read your stories, but i dont have an account with fictionpress. Please feel free to email me though. Thankyou :D

alexis.

i know what u mean! ppl r assholes about plagiarism. thats why i took my stories down. i still read other ppls stories but i feel bad bcuz so many amazing authors r taking their stuff down. i loved ur story! keep writing bcuz trust me, i cudnt take my eyes off this story nd i kno alot of other ppl feel the same way about ur writing :)

I liked this story alot, it was so sweet and everything. Poor Jake. Can't wait to read more from you.

luv Middi~

This is possibly one of my most cherished stories on fictionpress it was one of the first i read and one that kept me reading!

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i have read this story over two days and i think it is great

Overall fun and cute, good twist at the end with Crystal and her terrible luck in birth/pregnancy issues. A good piece, worth the read.

Ok, a lot of the words in this don't actually EXIST. "Companionable" is NOT a word.

And you REALLY need to have more punctuation. Ever heard of a little thing called a COMMA?

aw i could not stop reading this story...get it published

This is such a great story. It's such a pity that there are so few reviews. It's obviously just because the story is so old and many people don't bother looking for completed older stories. Anyway, great job. I absolutely loved it.

Crys and Jake were definitely my favourite couple. I enjoyed the epilogue so much that I almost wish it had been made a sequel. The two of them finding their way back to each other would have made a great story.

Simply excellent.

simple amazing. I loved it!

that was a good story to read...just glad that their realtionship work out in the end...well so loving it..can't believe that its the end already..well gotta go now...so peace out then girl...

This is a great story i have read it over and over again i love and i love the marriage trap or whatever it is called it was so good also you should write more because you are such a good writer

Hey, just wanted to review this story because it had been one of my favorites. I remembered reading this story at and had loved it but never could find it everytime I looked it up. But anyway, I started using fictionpress and found it again. You can only imagine how happy I was. :)

you got me glued to my pc monitor. long but nice...i enjoyed reading this. I'm smiling now. also, your flow of words were easy to read at.