|Reviews for Window Seat|
| Pippi chapter 1 . 1/4/2002
I think that you should take "thinking if there's a girl crying like me" and stick it at the end, because it doesn't seem like you're crying in the rest of the poem. All of the rest of the info is along the same line of thinking, so that if you took that line out, you'd have a great poem, and then if you stuck it at the end you'd have it sticking out at the end instead of the middle. Know what I mean? That wasn't a great explenation, but this is a good poem. I'm so thrilled that it wasn't sappy. It was great.
Thanx for the review!
| Yue Kage chapter 1 . 1/3/2002
interesting...Kinda just ends though but I like how you have your own world. I do too but I have to be asleep to get there.
| Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 1/2/2002
I like window seats, and its cool to have ur own world, even if u feel like ur partly in the real one, but disconnected from it
| AmBLONDE1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2001
I like your writing style. Thank you for reviewing my first post. Amber
| Death's Girlfriend chapter 1 . 12/28/2001
I like it! I know the feeling..
| empty account chapter 1 . 12/28/2001
Sometimes I stare out the window at school and daydream, but my thoughts are never this dark. Keep writing.