Why, oh why, do all the authors that I loke, and all the stories that I love get cut off? You have an amazing story here but you haven't updated for, what, four years now? And I'm dying to know what happens, and this is unfair, but then again, life's unfair, and I have no idea if you'll ever upload again, much less see this comment, but if you do, I'd just like you to know that there are still some readers that care about what happens to this adorable couple. Like me. So yeah. If you find it in your heart to continue this story it would be greatly appriciated.

Ah, I want more! Great story so far. I haven't read any stories here for a few years so this was a great one to bring me back to the website.

her dad is a right bastard by the way

love your writing

Great story :))

pls pls update soon!

should you ever continuo it, I will read it!

I like your opening a lot and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your story!

please please please update soon!

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

hey! great story, its really interesting so far, i'd love to see how JC and cindy's relationship progress, please update soon, i hope you havent given up on this story.

Will you ever continue this? I found it ages ago, really liked it... From all appearances it seems dead. It would be nice if you continued it, if you could...

ugh no, i was SO in to this story, and you left me hanging! well, you likely won't get back to it any time soon, so i won't implore you to update. just know that you have some serious talent, especially if you were writing this mainly while still in high school. of course, the plot isn't incredibly original and i feel like the story's meant to be set in the 50s, but your actual construction is so evocative. i've rarely seen a first-person pov done so masterfully on fp before. the depths and layers of cindy's character are revealed so naturally and realistically, and she develops and changes at the perfect pace - it's a fully immersive and convincing journey for the reader. you're probably graduating from college now, and i hope you're still pursuing writing. good luck with all.

HEY! I know there's prolly not much of a chance that you'll finish this but it's good! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! haha you've definitely got me on the edge of my chair. Do consider finishing it?

god, i love this

i realise you probably will never write another chapter for this story again but i must say how wonderfully constucted this story is. It really has hit a note with me. It is rare i find such a beautifully written piece of work. maybe someday you'll finish this - it could be a masterpiece. I'll be waiting.

With fond wishes-

Natalie