Reviews for Fire and Ice |
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Kendra-S chapter 10 . 3/15/2004 like it. update |
labrat47 chapter 10 . 3/11/2004 WOW! YOU'RE NOT DEAD! Oh my gosh, this is SO good- you MUST WRITE MORE SOON! YOU CAN'T JUST END IT LIKE THAT! great job :) |
JoeyLi chapter 10 . 3/9/2004 This is an excellent story. You have a good use of words that make each sentence meaningful. There were little to no mistakes and your characters were scripted wonderfully. And for a small small small mistake, your first chapter said podium (which you mean the stand where she put her papers) however, a stand like that is not called a podium but is called a lecturn. A podium is a stage and a lecturn is the stand. Its just that people usually says and so and so is on the podium and many people think they are talking about the lecturn that the word itself is lost. Ending in people saying podium instead of lecturn. Other than that mistake, your story has the content, a plot. The genre plot may have been used a lot, but you managed to put twists and add fuel to the story. Good job D and continue to show us your skills D Update soon |
lalala lovely elle chapter 10 . 3/6/2004 AH! thats it? i need more! sorry to be demanding but yea its great! i hope you update real soon because i have to know what happens next! keep up the great work! update! |
purple sea chapter 10 . 3/3/2004 Update, update, update |
Aidrianna chapter 10 . 3/2/2004 YOU UPDATED! oh my god it only took you long enough! no, i love you (for updating) and i love your story and i know how it is with being busy but thank you, at least for updating. goodness. i had to go back and read the whole thing again (since it took so long for you to update!) and it's still wonderful and as good as i remeber. you write incredibly well and now i am horribly jealous. anyway, this means you'll update more often, right right? but once again. HUGE yay for updating! |
hypERIN chapter 10 . 3/1/2004 awesome update...very deep... can't wait for the next one |
You Need More Flair chapter 10 . 2/29/2004 You are a HORRIBLE EVIL person... EVIL! SO LONG! SO FUCKIN' LONG! Please, please don't make me wait that long again... Please... By the way, I love the story. It is excellent. ;) |
passion101 chapter 10 . 2/28/2004 I really like this story, especially this chapter. I really liked how she viewed her opinions. They were deep, and quite true to be honest. I really hope that JC can forgive her and save her from the wratch from her family. |
sashayn chapter 10 . 2/28/2004 I like this story ) You'll really have to update it fast! |
aiur chapter 10 . 2/28/2004 hey i just found your story and i've been sitting here reading it instead of doing my math assignment O oops i'll pay for that. this is really really good, as you've probably been told from all your reviews. it's a really typical plot line, and i think it's totally overdone (the whole marriage-partner thing) but you've taken a different approach to your characters and by concentrating on THEM not the assignment. beautiful job, 'cause it really sets this apart from the others with the same plot line. kudos ... i have nothing constructive to say, shame on me, but i couldn't find anything wrong! you have a great beta-reader, hehe. just keep writing PLZ this is going on my alerts. and could you check out my story "Protector II"? i like getting constructive critism from authors who are at the top of their craft, so, yes ... please please? ~k8 |
WingedOne chapter 10 . 2/28/2004 As I don't really have the largest amount of time right now (excuses I know *facepalms*), I'm just going to pop in and let you know that I absolutely love this story. It's wonderful and very, very well thought out and written beautifully. You've got talent, dear. I'm so happy that this story is back! I've waited and waited and I've never reviewed because I'm *such* a craphead, but, here I am, and, yeah...! I can't wait for the next chapter, no matter how long it takes. *shudders at the thought of Calculus* I'm staying *far* away from that, thanks! Cheers - Winged One |
kgcyglu chapter 10 . 2/28/2004 You finally updated. Yay. I loved the chapter. Please, update as soon as you can. Thank You. ~ck |
ScreamMyHeadOff chapter 10 . 2/27/2004 good story keep writing please! |
Jess chapter 10 . 2/27/2004 Interesting! Can't wait to read what will happen when she gets back home! |