awesome story so far. please update soon! i have one question, why are JC and Tom at ends? i don't think you really explained that... i think you just said they had a fight or something... anyways, agian, awesome story, and i can't wait for another update!

hey i really like your story! i would really like the next chap in JCs POV. hes kinda like a bit one sided. we dont really know just my

i just started this story and i think ima continue with it

Oh, I love this story SO MUCH. and i can't wait till you update. Cindy and JC HAVE to make up and get together, hurry! update!

woww. That was emotional. There's something about this story- at first glance, it seems kind of cliche, but it just goes outside the lines a little bit, and more and more until it turns out quite different that you'd expect. It's not an overdone kind of anti-cliche, just a very unique one. It seems to be discontinued, which is a shame.

nice one :)

oh ok this is a good story. i can't wait for more so please update, cya ~ Alenor.

Wow, I'm getting really into your story. Sarcasm rocks, and I love Cindy's I-can-stand-up-for-myself temper, although it always seems to get her into shitty situations. Anyway, I can't wait for you next chapter! ]

Hm... Cindy kinda over-cursed this chapter. You might wanna tone it down a bit. I mean, people do curse, but she was cursing more than I'd think her character would (unless your opinion differs from mine?)

Head games are annoying.

I once had a teacher named Mrs. Butt. She was a real bitch, too.

What's so embarrassing about Jackson? Ah, well, I know a guy named Christopher who goes by Cotton (who knows why) and has since elementary school. And a George who goes by Tony. Some guys just like to make up their names.

You know, I wonder what compells people to want to be popular. Is it the attention, or the fact that it shields you from people? If all you ever talk about with your friends is gossip, you never have to talk about real stuff.

I like being in the group I'm in at high school; I'm not popular, but I still have lots of friends, and I would trust them. None of the girls are jealous backstabbers, none of the guys are jackasses, and there's none of that dramatic "you stole my boyfriend!" kind of crap. Just "you want my ex? take him" and that sort of stuff. I can't stand catty girls.

Anyway, that was off-topic. This chapter was good, but I've noticed your chapters are short. If I were you (which I'm not) I would aim for 10 pages or more. Of course, it all depends on what a good stopping point is, but longer chapters usually mean a more rounded plot and a better story. There are exceptions, though (like the story I'm writing now, which is someone's journal - sometimes Isabella doesn't have time to write long entries or doesn't have much to say, so some of the chapters are short, just like a real person's journal).

I know how she feels, having someone steal something like that. IU would be mortified if anyone ever read anything I've written (unless, of course, it's someone on the internet who I don't know and thus don't have to meet face-to-face).

It's weird, but I'd rather have a complete stranger read my writing and tear it to shreds over the internet than a friend read it and compliment it. You never know what they're really thinking.

wow...i adore this story...update really soon!

i love this story so much keep writing it!

awesome