I can't wait for your new chapters! :) I think this novel is great, and I feel like I've been waiting five years for the rest!

I've posted reviews to other people saying I love their stories, but I knew they really weren't good enough to get printed/published, but this, although a little more supernatural than I usually read, pulls it off in a realistic way. I really do love it, and I think after you use it for your Senior Project, you should get it published. It'd be a hit with anyone who has taste. I haven't read that much yet, so I can't give you comments on the plot, but I can tell you that I know I'll love it and be hooked until the end.

Hiro: *falls to ground and twitches* Hiro's friend walks over. "Dude, that was so good I think she had a heart attack." *Hiro's ghost appears* OooOOoO Friend: She says that was good. Hiro: OoO Friend: Yep. Good job (To Hiro) Don't you know better than to go off reading good fictions like that?

Suspence. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Is Janelle a witch? Because she's got the rimmed eyes, and that would definately be enough to make her parents wig out.

You had better get a high mark on your student project, because this story is really awesome. I can't wait until Rika finally changes again!

Very touching at the end. It's good to play on the reader's emotions. It allows them to better connect with the story. Good work.

Whoa! Very emotional. Gets the reader really into it. They are able to make connections. Very well written. You don't see something of this caliber from mosst high school students. Great job.

Leave my wanting more. A very good tactic, but it may get more than a few people made at you if you leave them hanging too long. As always, good work.

I liked the battle scene. You kept it just gory enough to keep the reader interested, but made sure it stayed within the given pg-13. Well done.

Beautifully written. I am just glad I am reading this during the day, otherwise, I would be sorely tempted to recheck the locks on my door. I like how you are able to keep an air of mystery and erieness(

That was quite good for an opener to any story. It opens up possibilities for all different directions and it gives you the chance to branch out on either of the four set characters. Well written.

Let's go shopping! Hi there. I really like this story alot, which is more than i can say for some of the 'originals' out there circulating the site. Your descriptions are wonderful and I love the way you manage to make everything flow while still keeping the reader captivating. Keep writing this please. (What am I saying? You have to keep writing this for you Senior project) K, how's this. Keep updating this please. (That works). Rich sounds really hot. This novel is extremely entertaining so I'll check back every so often to see if it has been updated

hey J! guess what your story SUCKS haha, just jokin, u know i love it! any one who reads these sumbits should take my advice and read this, this is J's first novel and she is doing a wonderful job! so if you have the time read Rhythm Emotion!

This is really, really good.. I hope Rich and Rika hook up.. _; Keep it goin'!

Hey Jeni, this story is well written and the characterazation excellent. And, as a personal note, you've got Forest down pat almost. :)