Reviews for shattering window
Morwain chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
pretty
Loup17 chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
it's not bad, different from the others but not bad, u can actually write good haikus; most people are *ehh* but you are truly talented at it

JA
Emi Amara chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
Hiya! O this is a really good haiku! 'glittering clouds' is my favorite part

cya )

Winged Girl
Zainab chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
Nah, I don't do flames (unless someone REALLY ticks me off-but I'm not here to write about that) I like how you describe the clouds as glittering. *sees glitter...chases after it*
just like me chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
I cant say anything bad about this poem,. Some awsome poems are written in school, yours is no exception.
la presa de la noche chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
k, um...what's that got to do with a shattering window, i prepared for a big heartbreaking depressing thing, and i get this happiness? what's the world coming to? then again, you wrote it in mah class... nothing good comes from math class, besides graduation...anywho, it was a very good haiku, considering math class...
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 12/15/2002
Awesome piece.

Heart of the Sword
Karianua Lightwood chapter 1 . 10/14/2002
I don't get it, but I like the wording. :P
hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 8/11/2002
great, 'glittering clouds' like this best, shattering windows can be beautiful *g*
wqwq chapter 1 . 8/10/2002
maths class sux but this poem is ok
moonbunny38 chapter 1 . 5/27/2002
it's so pretty! crystalline's a cool word.
Laralanthalasa chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
May be short, but still good!
lady alpha chapter 1 . 5/20/2002
Good imagery. Shattering windows ARE beautiful.
Endless Tears chapter 1 . 5/19/2002
Wow.. so short and yet so great! :) I loved that.. :) You are such a great writer! And you seem like a pretty cool person. If you ever want to talk just drop me an E-Mail at You seem like an interesting person.. :) So don't hesitate to e-mail me!
playergurl chapter 1 . 5/19/2002
rainbow crystalline... nice...
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