Hope this is just the start of more to come
Enjoyed it, good reading, good plot

Good action but you must have paragraphs to make it easier to read.

Great story!

I liked the premise. In general the writing was pretty good. I'd like to see

some paragraphs added but all in all nice job.

Awsome story...nice plot...its really cool i would like to see more

TEEHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Awesome! Very good story.

Nice idea, however stupid the story came out.

the tactics were redicules, faced with an enemy like that all officers would be familiar with the basic rules of what they'd do.

the sensible tactic would be to keep some of the fighters with the station and send the rest of them to join the corvetes. All this assuming the enemy was so stupid not to come in as fast and as close as possible.

Another point, the Spartens like the Romans didn't belive in "Victory at any cost" but simply that fighting was an honorable thing to do and it shouldn't matter to the soldiers loved ones if he died on the batlefield since he died with honor.

One last thing a race which is known to comitt atrocieties would either be already at war with all signers of the "Accords of Gethdros V" or it would be the same kind of empty treaties that have been signed so often in the past.

pretty nice. Good details but a little bit confusinh

Please put this into paragraph form. That is my main complaint about this story, because I've seen it and put up with it so often.

Cool story

Very good there could be a little more cursing though hehehehehe

Enjoyed it very much, although I think it needs some paragraphs.