Reviews for Diary of a Con-Man: Inheritance
richgirl chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
I liked your story because myserty stories usually give me the chills. But this one was set in the sunny bahamas and it was all quite pleasant, sunny and cheerful. Your story was a very enjoyable read. As a little construtive crisism, Nick didn't have a lot of character development. The story seemed plot, and not chracter driven, but it still would have been nice to get to know the main character better. However, keep up the good work :)