So beautiful... I was in awe. I love the detail of the story, and all it's poetic loveliness.

God you made me cry, beautiful simply and truely beautiful.

So beautiful! I almost cried!

beautiful story

T_T So sad... yet beautiful... excellent job!

I like the way you write. The paradox in some cases make a very strong impression. And the story was simply beautiful. _

*sniffles* Sad but cute. I actually have a boy called Lee at my school but he doesn't look like your Lee. My Lee looks more like the other guy.

Anyways, cool!

Shadow

PS I love black roses, but can you get them in real life?

Wow, this is awesome! You have to get it published!Wow...

That was very well written. It was like a long piece of poetry, and it was an interesting thing to write about. I also see an obsession with angels in most of your work, am I right? Hehe.

Darkly beautiful and elegantly poetic; I loved this story. Brilliant job.

~Lala

beautiful.

dis is GOOOOOD... i think it's realli good so yeah.. continue?

_ that's beautiful ... ;_; just beautiful ... you had some lovely poetic lines in here that I enjoyed very much!

Ooooh, that was so saaad! **hugs poor sad person** Yoo should write a backstory to it. . . . **nods** I like yoor stories. ;-;

i like the description of the feathers. i usually don't like reading stories in the first person narrative but...really pretty... did lee really come for him? didn they live happily ever after? or was he hallucinating from the emotional loss and cold and stuff? anywho, really pretty. though i think third person is better. kayz baiz!