This is really good. I think it's good that you can write about these topics :o)

~Baby Rose~

I sense a recurring theme among most of your poetry...Not that it's a bad theme at all. This, too, along with your others, is a good poem. Not your absolute best, but not your worst, either.

I liked it, but the title didn't seem to fit. don't know why though.

this line was especially good: "See her face, hear her laugh, feel the shape

of her back"

Thanks for sharing your work. Please R&R mine if you get a chance.