I thought it was very good for your first poem. I liked it! Great job.

~KML92

Wow.. as your first.. that's great!

Keep it up. I hope to read more from you.

But, I recommend you change your summary.

It can be a bit of a put off. Nonetheless, I enjoyed reading your poem

Wow, very nice. I really liked the opening line you have a very nice flow. Two questions, were there supposed to be periods before the capitle letters in the middle of lines, or line breaks? it flows well the way it is I was just curious. And how did you get rid of the spaces between the lines. I put a poem up, and it doubble spaced it, even though it was supposed to be all one stanza, and i cant figure out how to fix it.

Great rhyming and rhythm. And the imagery is beautfiul. eloquent job!

Critic, eh? I like your vocabulary. If you feel a need to review something, PostedInsanity is me and needs reviews- this account isn't intended for publicity. ;)

-mi

Very good. You have pulled off the rhyming without stuggling. I despise reading poetry that struggles to make words rhyme. Well, that's what you get when you want to use the word "claustrophobic" in your poem. *sigh*

But I digress.

You have wonderful imagery, and what seem to be hidden meanings. Not many writers can do both, and do them well.

I congratulate you. This is good.

Moonshine and Twilight,

Kelly

i am not much of a poet...but from what i could tell this was really good. much better than my first poem especially! heehee. i love the first and last lines

~color outside the lines~

Publish date: 01-10-02

EEp, I don't think you'll see this, but your poem is AMAZING. I agree with Bluemere: those lines are brilliant! Great work!

Keep writing!

Very impressive. I like the rhythm and rhyme patterns very much. And the first two lines are breathtaking!

Excellent, and I hope to see more of your work soon.

Cheers!

Hum. I like your rhymes and your style. I wish you had more work though! *pouts* But if you upload any more, I wanna be the first to know! _ It's obvious in this poem that you can really make a whammo! Cheers. Ta ta for now dawling!

Adieu mon ami until we meet again.

w-r-i-t-e m-o-r-e- o-f-t-e-n!

Um... it was alright, pretty good. I tend to be better at drawing/painting/sculpturing/etc. than writing... perhaps it's my shallow outlook on words. No no, just grouchy. Nice poem, it left room for the imagination. Big words though... 'cemagoguery' ...! I'm not EVEN going to ask...

You rock.. your poetry rocks. ) I hope you keep writing..

Mmmm... Yopu likes! You have created very colorful imagery. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading your other stories/poems.

~*Yopu*~

I liked this. It's very short and almost seems unfinished. I'd like to read more of your work. You should write more )