Reviews for Tanka Collection
AE86 Fan chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Tankas have 57577 syllables, not 57575. Get it together, mate! Apart from that, though, it's pretty good.
greenzzz chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
i like this one...especially the last line...*smiles*

Drying Tears of Blood chapter 1 . 2/15/2002
It's very short. But that doesn't take anything away from the piece. I actually think the simplicity makes it much better as opposed to a longer, more tedious one that clogs you with words. You paint a beautiful yet mournful portrait with it.
Jentien chapter 1 . 1/29/2002
kewl , that is pretty sweet
Meegwun chapter 1 . 1/17/2002
this poem IS a whisper of beauty, in itself. Just lovely... i'm going to review the rest of your poems, i promise, but i have to go to sleep now since it's 1:15 in the morning and i'm supposedly 'home sick'. I'd ask you to review some of my poems, but they don't even compare. *cries* email me if you want to talk poetry or anything, really. I'd really love to know about your philosophies. :)
LadyUranus chapter 1 . 1/17/2002
That was beautiful! I learned about haikus in Japanese History class... there exapmles are nothign compared to this. Great job!
mikae77 chapter 1 . 1/16/2002
whisper of beauty? oh well

thnx 4 reviewing my poem. My daddy is the best out there! _

nice poem.
Emily M. Hanson chapter 1 . 1/12/2002
Well written. Good descriptions.
katyruth chapter 1 . 1/12/2002
hmm... this is a nice poem, it is so structured but allows so much freedom! keep up the good work!