|Reviews for Haiku Collection|
| sarah1491 chapter 2 . 1/30/2006
Nice Haiku~ I love haiku poems _
| handle187 chapter 20 . 8/21/2003
Excellent poetry ! I love "Erotic Dust"
| Lady of Stars chapter 4 . 1/26/2003
I'm reviewing Lighthouse
Hey! That was really, really cool! It's so difficult to write haiku because of the syllables, but you do a wonderful job writing it!
| Lornyl Mahtsae chapter 20 . 7/15/2002
I love your haikus!
| Lornyl Mahtsae chapter 17 . 7/15/2002
wow, nice! I just wanted you to know that I like the ones I didn't review, just as well, I just read faster when I don't review every one...
| Lornyl Mahtsae chapter 11 . 7/15/2002
I like this especially too...
| Lornyl Mahtsae chapter 8 . 7/15/2002
This is, like, Me! Good Job!
| Lornyl Mahtsae chapter 4 . 7/15/2002
Oh, I love this one, very good. My mom loves Lighthouses, she even has a room dedicated and decorated acording to pictures and stuff of them!
| Lornyl Mahtsae chapter 2 . 7/15/2002
hey, Bella. I saw your picture on my way in... You're really pretty! I like this one!
~Lornyl Mahtsae :)
| Cel chapter 1 . 5/5/2002
I enjoyed your 3 haikus! I've never written in 'haiku' format but when I started, I was writing specifically 6-line poems which I called "Sixtits"; similar to sestet in that the last 2 lines rhymed. Now, my poetry is terse but open-ended! You might read my 1st, and only submission called "Celia". Maybe you will let me know what you think...
| Door chapter 1 . 4/19/2002
Jesus is not a myth.
| FrozenWaterFall chapter 13 . 4/8/2002
"of an old man sleeping"
i really liked it...i read a few others too. Very good poetry, if you wanna read some of mine check out my username, "MAGICALDREAMZ" or this one
| E. Gao chapter 1 . 3/8/2002
Wow. That second line is excellent-'bright sky shafts rape my vision...'
I like the message-something along the lines of 'find your own way in this wasteland of an earth.' (Okay, I have to admit, that was pessimistic...but that's me, I guess.)
I usually tend to avoid haikus like the plague, because they simply don't appeal to me, but the way you've structured this (a long string of them) is creative and also pleasing to the eye. Also, the summary caught my eye. Great, excellent (I find that I repeat myself a lot in reviews).
| Lornyl Mahtsae chapter 1 . 2/22/2002
perfect. My exact thoughts...
| Drying Tears of Blood chapter 1 . 2/15/2002
A true work of art.