Even though you wrote it for school, I still like it. :) Most things written for school turn out kinda corny, but this one isn't. Very well written. Good job! :)

and you rated it pg?

cool... it's good.

I was wondering why you put the pancakes...if you don't go to our school, you won't get why i put that there so...just ignore this...you know what i commented on school...don't bug me and go check out Together Again...you haven't reviewed for a bit.