I think you should remove your own comments. let the poem speak for itself. It's annoying, and hard to find the tone of the than that, it's okay.I hope you write and write and write, so you select the things you upload rather than just upload anything.

kawaii!

Finally, someone who doesn't think fall is evil and depressing! I like it, but it's a tad short, but you didn't ruin it by adding too much detail _

thats a pretty poem misao. a little short, but pretty _

that was good (haiku?) i think it catches the autumn mood perfectly - almost gentle isn't it - well done! )

this is cool ,but it is short. i think if u added sum more, it would make a huge impact...then again, what do i know? lol.

anywayz, it's nice, nothin but ice! (good thing, don't worry)

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Well, that was... short, but creative!