|Reviews for Future|
| Morwain chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
| Emi Amara chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
hi! oh, this is cool, morning and dawning ryhme! nice ending too,
- winged girl
| agny chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
I don't quite understand this one. I#m stupid.
| Zainab chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
Cool transition from the second line to the last line.
| just like me chapter 1 . 5/7/2003
Oh, that was really good. (Sorry my reviews suck...) I liked it
| toysoldier chapter 1 . 3/8/2003
wow. this is so beautiful, so simple, but what a wonderful way to describe a moment. I love your poetry!
| Aurora Barrett chapter 1 . 2/21/2003
I don't see it as depressing at all. It does have many meanings. Wait. I change my mind. It can be slightly depressing depending on how you read it. I'm reading it over and over as I read this. They say haikus are primarily written about seasons, but I think they're good for topics which don't require many words. Or things you don't have many words for. Newayz. Not gonna waste your time with my babblings. Newayz.. I like this. Excellent work.
| la presa de la noche chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
double meanings? ok. um...oh, i think i get it. yes, i was warned. i like this haiku.
| Pretty Barn Owl chapter 1 . 10/13/2002
Pure elegance. I am in awe. You have astounding insight and a talent for sharing it with the world.
I put you on my fav. authors list, so I'll be back.
| Lady Tenjin chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
a little depressing, I must say. But lovely as usualy.
| wqwq chapter 1 . 8/10/2002
future is always depressing
| Hikarineko Skadi chapter 1 . 8/8/2002
it pretty and a little depressing but hey the future is depressing.. see ya kari
| moonbunny38 chapter 1 . 5/27/2002
what can i say? yet another great poem.
| Laralanthalasa chapter 1 . 5/26/2002
Neat one! This one makes me think of Oracles and such. Keep writing!
| The one and only STAR chapter 1 . 5/20/2002
Lovely...you're great. BTW, thanks for reviewing my stuff _