|Reviews for Omnis Falsus Est|
| herringprincess chapter 5 . 6/23/2003
what do you mean plot outline? if the rest isnt written, write it. wheres your stamina, dude?
im intrigued, please continue...
| herringprincess chapter 4 . 6/23/2003
'damn it! not again!' lol!
| herringprincess chapter 2 . 6/23/2003
well if they will put a stained galss window of the scottish play in a theatre, somethings bound to go wrong ;-)
i really like this so far, i can actually see stuff in my minds eye which is quite an achievement since i dont usually have one (i seem to spend most of books skim reading till i get to some dialogue!). like the way you set up atmosphere, a kind of sense of foreboding, like the macbeth window ;-) and the person at the top of the staris that wanst there etc. and we know its all going to go horribly wrong cos of the prologue...
you are such a tease madam! first you move your fics so ihave to go and hunt for them, then i see you teasing your readers with promise of new chapters, but only if they review.
well, there, theres my tuppence-worth. i read your poetry too but i nver know how to review poetry so i didnt. youre very brave, i cant bear people i know to read my poetry! i post it under another name that noone knows...
keep it up, ill read the rest later
| Ennixeve chapter 5 . 6/2/2002
Wow, I'm hooked! More! FM! hehe am gonna bug you for more of this. There is more right? There better be! And if there isn't, write it now!
Love it :)
| Dyl chapter 4 . 3/15/2002
sorry again for late reviewing! but well worth the wait. truly impressive. very strange, and i admit to being a tad confused, but await explanation eagerly. keep going! :)
| Ennixeve chapter 4 . 3/1/2002
Wow! Now anyone can write fan fiction, (Even I can write it, not as well as you, but I make a passable attempt...) but to write an original piece with such style and flair, with such brilliant description, a stunning storyline and the amazing ability to intreague and interest the audience, to hold their attention entirely the whole way though... *that* is talent. I have said this before and I will say it again... every time I read this piece you never fail to surprise and shock me with your writing ability. One day you *will* be published and when you are, I will be able to say I read some of your earliest work. I look forward to that day and until then, I beg for chapter 4 :)
| Dyl chapter 1 . 1/25/2002
hooray! and you say you're not a legend?
fantastic stuff. keep going. you must enter the writing frenzy, and not withdraw until your muse is spent! reminds me a little (and you may or may not take this as a compliment!) of clive barker?
weirder and weirder! love it!
| Ennixeve chapter 3 . 1/23/2002
Wow! Still loving the amazing description in this, you feel like you're right there with her. Rubber duck? Where the frell did that come from! I'm sure all will become clear in the later chapters. Love the ending! I'm hooked! Lets have more!
| Electra Creek chapter 1 . 1/21/2002
I'm not reviewing my own story... when I shunted it, I lost all my reviews, other than Eve's because she was nice enough to put them on again... This is the other reviews this got, so they're all together...
Andi: Anonymous Wow, this is very good, I hope that you contineu, please put more up soon :)
Pippa: I always forget to review stuff but I just have to let you know how fantastic this is! You have to keep writing!
It's all really well described and evocative(?) Gah! Lost my power of thesaurising! Will get back to you when I have more words!
Dylan Turner: The Reviewer is here.
A promising start!
I got the whole picture. The visual (well done on that), and the atmospheric side. Do more!
Here's a quote for the premiere poster:
"A melodic, metaphorical, monochromatic masterpiece!"
| Electra Creek chapter 2 . 1/21/2002
Took your time.. :-)
Intriguing. I am genuinely intrigued. As always, beautifully written. You set the scene very well, and I really like the creepy old theatre, and its less-than-magical inhabitants! (Well those we've met so far). I'm trying to guess where it's going to lead! Some machieveliian(sp) theatre company? Don't tell! Write more!
The Queen of Angst, and loooong FS mboard posts *giggle* and now this! Is there no end to your talents!
| Ennixeve chapter 2 . 1/21/2002
I am intreagued, love the bit about the rain driving people inside. As usual the discription is stunning, I could be there!
As always, we beg for chapter 2!
| Ennixeve chapter 1 . 1/21/2002
Wow! Every time I think I've got you sussed, you throw something like this at me! Amazing description, I'm there, I can see it all! Great beginning, now lets see chapter 1!
| Midasgirl chapter 1 . 1/21/2002
OH. MY. GOD. This is SO GOOD! The description is UNBELIEVABLE ... this has got to be one of the best things I've ever read on ! You better finish that dream soon girl ...! :) Brilliant. Catx