Reviews for A Light
Mysweetsummer chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
this feels choppy, as if there are different poems inside. if that was purposeful, good job. If not, i would suggest reading for the sound and looking for ways to make the sound, well, sound complete
Dreamweaver2 chapter 1 . 1/19/2002
ooooooooooo, sad. I like sad poetry, it helps to inspire more depressing (and bad) poetry on my part. really good! :P
Pixie chapter 1 . 8/19/2000
This is sad but very profound. I really love the way this can be interpreted so many ways. Very good work!