Whoa. That was great. In my opinion "The Artist" was much better than "Requiem", but they were both good!

0_o morbidness... I like these. Much so. And I am going to restain myself from my usual ranting as to why the hell -I- can't write poetry this good.

omy... you're a good writer. really. i mean it. i like the second one. so do u kno i found some good good pics of lij? lol... go to . and look for the elijah pics...they're cute.

luvyas hun

jolie

Wow...I didn't like "Requiem" as much, but it was a neat way of introducing the next poem. "The Artist" was incredible. Graphic, as the summary said but wonderfully, beautifully morbid.

-Bob

Absolutely marvelous! The imagery invades one's mind and banishes all foreign thoughts to the extremities of existence. I must say, I was greatly disturbed by both of them, the poems, and look forward to reading any future works of yours in this genre.

That is quite good. I can't wait until you add more to it.. I loved the second one... dark and mysterious with hidden meaning... Well done, my mortal minion.

RealmLost

Oh my gosh! I like your poetry! Both of them speak volumes! Lots of hidden depths! Disturbing, dark...