|Reviews for Affinity Uncertain|
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/18/2015
*sniffles* update pleaseee ;A;
| ngt chapter 12 . 8/2/2006
i love this!
are you ever going to update it?
please do so!
| key of A major chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
hey, this story is pretty good apart from some mistakes in sentence construction and spelling mistakes, so if you want a BETA i would be glad to look over the chapters for you
| Cookie Gestapo chapter 12 . 8/5/2005
Update damn you!
| the elephant spoon chapter 2 . 5/16/2005
CANBERRA! canberra? what the hell is that man thinking. is he trying to kill the kid with boredom? it's in the title can-BORE-a!Or maybe get the kid addicted to pot? (it's the only place you can legally grow pot (i think) so long as it's under a foot high and your not selling the stuff) it's also where we keep all our politicians, what was the father thinking! ...umm yes...now i dont know what to write...on to the story!
yay! it's interesting! i dont think i like the 4 "gods" of the school - it's almost as if your setting them up to be mean.
i think brad should work in a City Convenience Store cos there a convenient place to loose your money...
on to the next chapter!
[please note: i am an aussie. i love my country, but i also love to make fun of my country so i'm sorry if i offended anyone]
| the elephant spoon chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
WHE! AUSTRALIA! (you cant half tell i live there - in sydney too...)
i like your story, it has a nice pace (from what i can tell) and isn't sending me to sleep (thats bonus points considering how tired i am at the moment)
the school in your story sounds soo fun. our principal would kill is if we had a "gossip update"..and makes us wear stupid uniforms etc etc...
i wonder what will come next 0_0 ne? will you scare Allen with tales of Drop Bears? and snakes and things?
| Amour Amorita Saphira chapter 9 . 2/7/2005
Wah! Kawai I loved it.. please update soon... I could really feel as if I was the Allen and I was really surprise 'bout brad and eric's relaitionship hehe but I thought that if they were a couple it'll be cuter but it's still cute with them being brothers well, a really nice fic.. please update soon. I'm just so eager to know what'll happened next
| Chaotic Child chapter 12 . 9/12/2004
this is VERY cool! Please update soon!
| Hatono Miyuri chapter 12 . 8/30/2004
*blinks* I just went down to the little button thing and realised that there are no more chapters. That's not fair! You can't leave me hanging like that! *looks at last updated date* And I see you haven't updated in a LONG time... *pouts*
This was a very good fic! I loved it! The plot was interesting...if at times, a bit rushed. And...the grammar wasn't too good, but I can forgive that since your spelling was better.
I was shocked, to say the least, that Eric and Brad were brothers. -_-' I thought they *were* lovers...but ah well. I like the Allen/Ian action going on...although I'd like it more if you updated! *nudges* Hint hint...
Ah well, I'm putting you on my Author Alert list just in case you *do* decide to update within the next century!
*huggles Allen* He's so cute!
| Pineapple Chiffon Cake chapter 12 . 8/11/2004
M...this is such a yummy story _ I love the different relationships that you have worked into the plot. Especially Allen's mixed feelings on his sexuality. The relationship between Brad and Eric is also very interesting. Hope they can coherently talk to each other at some point _;; Very nice. Update soon!
| Lady Alexiel chapter 12 . 6/23/2004
I loved your fic, please up date it soon, ok? I can't wait to see the end!
| technodragon78 chapter 12 . 5/23/2004
I like your story alot. Update update. Come finish,PLLEEWASE!
| Nicolyte chapter 11 . 4/25/2004
Woo, this is going in the bookmarks. I haven't read chapter 12 as of yet, but I will eventually.
I really, really love this so far! It's great! Loads of inspiration- I have you to thank for that! You're talented, I hope you know.
My favorite character at the moment would have to be. . . Ian and Eric is in second place (which is why I can't decide if I want Allen to be with Ian or Eric- well, I'm mostly for the Ian/Allen thing. . . but Eric. . . GAH- see?)
So yeah, though I haven't read 12 yet I know this story is finished, so I'm begging you to please update.
P - L - E - A - S - E
| Alexandros chapter 12 . 4/18/2004
. . . wow . . . Review man! It's soo Kawaii!
| jbchick84 chapter 12 . 3/15/2004
OH my god! Please tell me u are planning on finishing this story! it is so good!