hm...another deep write, keep up the good update asap...hm...his dad (eric/brads) is an a**h*.-.- i dont like him in the least bit-i hope mission impossible works out...but erics being an a** too...so...hn. well please update again soon.
-Dark Nekochan

yesh! i knew it! i just didnt write it because it wouldnt matter anywayz, since th enext chapter was already uploaded. infact, i usually dont review chapters that aren't the first or last ones unless i like them alot.
great mix in the plot though i was expecting it. you kinda gave it away with the fact that they shrugged and ran their hands through their hair, etc. the same, but good chapter. too bad this is the last one before i have ta wait for ya ta update... *grumbles* noones updating anymore...but I'm sure you dont want to listen to my whining, so onto the next chapter.
-Dark nekochan
ps. this storys already on my fav. list!

hm...this chapter was good. much deeper and less humour full than the others...but chapter...off to the next ..
-dark nekochan

ah, i just love this story,hehe, the humour's great. i particularily like the part with the brick wall and the worms...lol...well, off to the next chapter!
-Dark Nekochan

lol, i absolutly LOVE this story, its great! though you somtimes dont write words corectly or write the wrong ones, it dousnt matter. you make up that in plot, story, and humor! keep up the good work! i'm off to the next chappie!
-Dark Nekochan

no! I can't believe that was the last chapter *cries* I want to read more. *sulks*
Just one prob. I can think of; your grammer totally sucks. Really doll, it's horrible. Please try and do something about that... Ah well. Gotta go now, will be back to see if you've updated... *hugs*

I loved this story so far. Update soon. Thanks.

hee hee. kinda cool )
write more!

hi i would just like to point out to u that ur story seems undeniably similar to a series called Meteor Shower, dont know if u know what im refering to. the "four gods" as u call them are uncanningly like a group called F4. there's the arrogant eric, cold distant ian, male slut nick and all rounder mike. these personalities, along with their looks and money, make me think that u r more or less conjuring up the themes and characters from meteor shower. if u dont know what im talking about check up the series or the group on the net.

ok, so the plot is a little convotulated- so what? That's what makes it so fun to read!
Your characters are totally believable. They vaguely resemble characters from gundam wing (if you've heard of that... if not, you should!) but only somewhat. I can totally imagine each and every one of the main/semi-main characters as actual people. That's so cool!
Allen's such a sweetie-pie. I wish I were his friend... I wish he were a real person so I could meet him! Hehehe. That would be awesome. It's also realy cute how he gets all extra-discombobulated over little things. Yippee!
Anyway, despite (or rather, because of) the unrealistic and fantastical plot twists, this story is definitely going on my top ten list- for now. It will most likely stay, but I do hope you post the next chapter soon. I am ~so~ looking forward to it!
Much love to the ABSOLUTE and GREATEST OWNER of humorous and believable characters! (that's you, silly!)

'Me like story you write more ugga ugga!' The godness of the story has caused Silkie to return to a primal state. Watch the Silkie in her natural habitat.

I havent finished reading it but this '“Ian, your Dad wants you back to live with him and your sister want you to come-”' is so Gravitation and/or I.N.V.U. Guess thas ok but i just get this feeling of reading a stolen scene.

-Silkie

no no no no no no no no no no no no no ~!~!

I LOVE YOUR STORY

ITS SO SWEET

AND ALLEN IS SO ADORABLE

I LOVE THIS SLASH

YOU KICK SO MUCH ASS

YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SO SOON

I MEAN IT

NOW!

This is good, just, it needs betaed. Lol. Other than that, WOW! Everyone wants Allen! Lol. So, it will be Ian/Allen, right? What of Eric? O_O Hah, update again soon.

Hey!

Whoa! I just read 12 chapters in one sitting, that's gotta mean something.

I like the way you're handling the issues, and not just turning everything into an excuse for an orgy.

The spelling and grammar could use some brushing up every once in a while, but those are minor problems.

The story is going fine, waiting for your next update.

Ian sounds really intriguing... more so than Eric... but that's my opinion. I guess it's because there are so many blanks around him.